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Things Fall Apart
(Atonement, 1/21/08)
By Nicholas Nicastro

While little sister Briony (Saoirse Ronan)watches from a mansion window, big sister (Keira Knightley) shares an erotically-charged moment with the son of a servant (James McAvoy). 13 year-old Briony draws the wrong conclusions about the nature of the encounter, which lead to misunderstandings in the family. These, in turn, cause no end of trouble for the unlucky lovers.
      This kind of premise seems best suited for sex farces set among Britain's quince jam-and-jodhpurs class. Such boudoir comedies are typically rounded off by a "did I happen to mention ...?" exculpatory revelation and a big marriage scene. What is perhaps the most surprising about the Ian McEwan novel Atonement is that it takes this slim idea in a deathly serious direction. Instead of the tribulations of love, McEwan wants to explore the destructive power of making fiction—in its most anti-social guise, lying—and its paradoxical power to redeem as well.
      Full disclosure: I haven't read the book. I've seen Joe Wright's movie, however, and based on it I can't necessarily applaud the gambit. Wright's adaptation of Atonement is an unsettled, unsatisfying piece of work—a film that tries to combine the prestige of Masterpiece Theatre with po-mo literary self-consciousness, yet seems ashamed of the first and reluctant to invest much in the second.
      There seem to be at least four embryonic vestiges of other stories stuck inside Atonement's ungainly body. The opening tableau, set in 1935, is a tense and increasingly awkward bedroom farce about Briony's unfounded accusations of rape against the object of her frustrated desire, Robbie (McAvoy). The second jumps ahead a few years, when Britain is under German air attack and Robbie is stranded at Dunkirk with the rest of the British Army. The third jumps ahead still farther, when a grown-up Briony (Romola Garai)realizes the effect of her misapprehension and tries to patch it up with her sister and Robbie. The fourth introduces Vanessa Redgrave as the contemporary Briony, who has become a famous novelist but still smarts with guilt over mistakes done decades before.
      How the last thread relates to #1 and #3 need not be divulged. #4 does feel like a makeshift device, though—a kind of Vanessa ex machina that talks a resolution into the camera without dramatizing it. #2 is the most visually impressive, including an masterful tracking shot over the beach in northern France where hundreds of thousands of British soldiers wait for rescue or annihilation. The absurdity of the scene (some Tommies sunbath, some ride the carousel, some grease themselves for a long swim across the channel) rivals parts of Apocalypse Now in its desperate, flat-out insanity. There's also no conceivable way this has anything to do with the rest of the film.
      Now this writer is not too innocent to suspect why the wartime spectacle was shoehorned into this movie: it gives Atonement its bona fides as the kind of historical epic that wins Oscars for Best Picture. Similar can be said for romantic shots of its willowly heroine posed against the white cliffs of Dover. True, that kind of stuff worked like a charm in Wright's last film, Pride & Prejudice (2005). Perhaps the difference is that in that case Jane Austen (and Wright) was not trying to tell a story and deconstruct it at the same time. The day I need Vanessa Redgrave to explain the appeal of a windswept Keira Knightley is the day I give up quince jam, jodhpurs, and anything else good in life.
      Granted, there are interesting ideas on the minds of the people who made Atonement. To believe they succeed in expressing them here, though, is to be more credulous than Briony herself.

©2008 Nicholas Nicastro

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